Yoshimi Battles the Pink Robots, pt. 1 in ASL

Hey guys,
First attempt at translating a song into sign language. The song is called "Yoshimi Battles the Pink Robots, part 1" by the Flaming Lips. It is a part of a rock opera about a girl and a robot that fall in love. When they first meet, she is supposed to destroy them. This is the song that talks about their first meeting.
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Thanks! Hope you enjoy it!